After effects editing! Feedback on text!

I have reached the stage of the project where I have completed the 3D environment in Game Launcher. I researched how to screen recording and found a tutorial to screen record using the Xbox app.
Here is a link to the tutorial: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OfPbr1mRDuo

I filmed a walk through of the environment. I opened After effects and created 8 scenes in the composition. I divided up the story into each of these scenes and typed each word onto its open layer. I have started animating and adding effects to the text.
Feedback: I received feedback on the text so far and it was suggested to animate the text in a way so it appears as though someone is saying it. Also to change the font color and animation so that it is clearer to read. The deadline is approaching fast so I will aim to get the animation of the text done for next Friday.
Here is a screen shot of the After effects file: